Tuesday, June 9, 2020
100 wc
There was a gold viola in the old music room.People had been searching for days minutes and still haven't found the viola.They thought that they lost it or someone has stolen it from the school the principal said who ever can find it will get a free lunch at the canteen.one of the kids had found it it was under everything.The kid just wanted a pie and a juicy.They also said that the viola was very ancient so they were glad to have it back at school.But the kid still enjoyed his pie and juicy with his mates at lunch.
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To Jack
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the same tense throughout the whole writing and didn’t accidentally use the present tense for any of the words. I also liked how you included what the kid did with his free lunch. Do you play any instruments?
From Charlotte
No I don't play instruments but do you play any?
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